Robbie+McCormac

Poetry Rules !

I want to use onomatopoeia, and Imagery!

1) It started off as a very cold February day

2) like the grim reaper himself

3) Xbox until his eye’s fall out of his head

4) bottles filled with urine everywhere

5) a wheel chair just sitting next to a big chair

6) floor until we where on the top of the world

7) enjoyed a little lunch on the roof.

charles bukowski

Memory Poem Wooooooooosh Goes the wind through my hair. Wooooooooosh From the air going upword while I fall down. Wooooooooosh Highbuildings are dangrously fun living up high seeing the sun. Wooooooooosh One little slip one accident one little lie.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh is what you here from the screaming angsity and anguish. Ahhhhhhhhhhh is the sound of destres and helplessness. Ahhhhhhhhhhh is the twisted face of knowing the doom that's coming.

Woahhhhhhhh is the feeling of hitting the ground and you keep falling. Woahhhhhhhh is the never ending fall from the top suspeneded in air and earth as one.

Whatttttttttttttt is getting the second chanc

Ode poem They are the most abused bleak thing's on this world. They go through pain and abuse and never complain. They always stay with you hugging you through the whole way. Used and abused covered in filth we need you though don't get in confused. We fix your abuse we bandage you up.

Pour the black candle wax on your broken surface break you up tear apart we make you new. You're like Atlas holding the world. You're everywhere on earth you keep us up over the water and over holes alike. The mighty road with your double yellow war paint. You prepare your self for your job 24/7 we need you. And you need us.

I was rasied I was rasied right. I was rasied to be the best I could be. I was raised to feel life and grab it by the throat. I was raised in the kitchen smelling my mom's intecing home made food. I was raised in two town's but I grew up in one. I was raised with taste of the good life sucking it all in when I could. I was raised by experince living life doing right and wrong. I was raised by respect. I was raised by the sight's I see only if you knew the thing's I seen. I was raised

Imagist Poem. You see the sky, Or do you see space? do you see the galaxy? Do you see the universe The possiblites are endless Look upon all of them till you see the other side. Unlock your full potetional.

6) Line being used "Pray that what we're running toward is what we want."

You better pray that there is no god for sin is to strong. sick desire takes the best of us lust, envoy, and jelousy take over. we get filled with it embraced in the dark light it. sweeps us away to someone you never knew you could become. Pray that what were running toward is what we want. You better pray that this life is the life you want. because you only get one fill your sick desire your jelousy your envoy continue on. let this life embrace you live on this wolrd as you may just pray that what were running toward is what we want.

Racism and hate this sick twist multiculteral debate. Everything we say now a days is racist these days. We call each other names put each other down even though we are all the same being. We're all flesh and bone nothing less nothing more the brilliant the young the old and dumb we are one. Pray that what we're running toward is what we want.

We were put on this earth for nothing more then a sick test. test the trust of your fellow man before they strike you down. the higher beings watching are little problem earth like it's nothing more then a reality show. Watch as crimes are commited then we are commited menatal hospital. and the true Irony is all the crazy creeps who we commited are the true ones who see god and we shun them. Pray that what we're running toward is what we want.