Sean+McAninch

1."Poetry is the door way to soul"-Floria 2. New Foot Hold.

Medifor and repetition

my godfather’s wife showed me a new game.

playing World of Warcraft.

constant pestering

when we would get play

she started a secont account.

+ It's about something you like. + I like that it's about a game. + It has family in it. ? Could it be a little bit longer? ? Is it only about W.O.W? ? What happened after that? What did you learn?

-Briana Hicks

 3.rough draft Ode to Law you keep us save we do and Don't uphold you we work to use you but do nothing for you some respect you but other do not.

Changed Ode To Cards In the card case where human hands have not commanded them some dressed up with shin others with a palace many with neither In the card case looking out into the world watching...whiting....wanting where they sit with 5 to 9 others why don't they get picked up ode to cards

4.Found Poem -Home-

Omg this computer is so slow

did you check your Facebook

no why

people posted on your wall

5.I was raised by the 90s I was raised by Saturday Morning cartoons wakening up early to Pokemon battles Pokemon yu-gi-ho Dragon Ball Z "Ahhhh Kio Ken Its OVER 9000" Kind of shows

i was support by Friends Mother Father Brothers "Wow your week Older brother code" Type of people

I was molded of ove Hoodes Cargo sneakers bass ball caps sort of clothes

I was tough by teachers Family games streets "Yo Hey you Ya that's right keep walking" type of experiences I WAS RAISED BY THE 90s

7.glowing the shin of the blade

forged in darkness

sharpened for war

a blade wrought in Iron

that will soon meet the cold edge of war

frozen in the shattering in the Fear of power

so is the cold embrace of steel

+ Very nice imagery + Good descriptive language ? What about breaking this poem into separate stanzas and develop different parts to the poem? ? Can you add imagery / metaphor that is unexpected?